ABSTRACT
Instead of saying, "Eliminate jargon," try, "El iminate jargon. Specifically, on page 16 you write about connecting j umpers to the MDF wi thout a floor plan. Instead, you could discuss insuring that floor plans provide the information necessary to connect the main distribution frame to the temporary wiring frame. Unless the case is designed only for telecommunications technicians, people will not understand the MDF and jumpers comments." Thi s wi ll all ow the author to understand the extent of the jargon that has been used, seek it out, and replace it with clearer language.
