ABSTRACT
Mature writers have a better idea of what they are introducing after they have written the draft. Beginning writers benefit from directly stating their focus in an introductory paragraph as a light to guide their draft. Direct PALs to coach each other in replacing these words at the close of a work session for writing a first draft. Framed Drafts prompt students to add the details used in the more formal language of acquaintances or people whom they have just met. When people go to work, they do not all get dressed up in suits and ties. There are as many different forms of clothing to wear on a job as there are jobs that people work hardfat every day and the products that the employees produce provide useful and necessary goods for consumers to enjoy. Camera stores provide services such as printing photos, providing information about various cameras and supplying products.
